In “Victory Lap,” both Alison Pope and Kyle Boot
find themselves figuratively paralyzed when faced with opportunities to act.
For Kyle, his moment of paralysis occurs when he stands on his porch watching
the “meter-reader” drag Alison away, debating whether to intervene. Alison, likewise, is haunted by the feeling of
immobilization as she dreams about deciding to stop Kyle from killing the
intruder. Both suffer from “analysis paralysis,” or inability to act due to
over-thinking.
Kyle’s analysis paralysis derives from his
obsession with contemplating the consequences of his actions. He constantly
harrasses himself by wondering “WHAT IF...RIGHT NOW?” (pg. 11) and early in the
story, he finds himself immobilized when he realizes that in order to clean
muddy footprints off the floor, he must leave more (pg. 11). When Kyle contemplates if he should help Alison, he imagines the consequences of helping: his parents’
reactions to his violation of their “directives” not to intervene and even how
his reputation would suffer if he were to call 911, admitting that he saw the
incident and chose not to save Alison. By over-thinking the results of his
actions rather than following his gut, he fails to act immediately.
Unlike Kyle, Alison quickly knows that she wants
to intervene. As she watches Kyle lift the geode to kill the intruder, she
whispers “Kyle, don’t" (pg. 26). However, she frequently wakes up from dreaming that she
failed to stop Kyle. She relates this feeling of paralysis to dreams in which
she wants to save a puppy but can’t because she must also balance a ball on her
head (pg. 26). The complication of the task by the addition of the ball
reflects Alison’s tendency to become immobilized by her imagination. For
instance, at the beginning of the story, she spends a rather long time at the
top of a staircase, lost in a fantasy and unable to proceed in reality.
George Saunders’ ability to enchant the reader
is evident in these moments of paralysis. By granting the reader access to all
Alison and Kyle’s thoughts, Saunders invites the reader not just to see how the
characters act, but to understand what thoughts, fears, and patterns of thought
compel them to act in the way they do.
I agree that Saunders ability to enchant comes from giving the reader access to the character's thoughts and what it compels the characters to do. I think it is interesting that you found the enchantment most specifically in the moments of paralysis. It is interesting how Saunders makes both Alison and Kyle experience these moments of paralysis so he can enchant the reader even more by exposing more about the characters and their motivations.
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