A giant shadow which was to be A house where evil ruled at night And the shadows at the gate, they seemed to be alive
The song uses shadows as a dual symbol, both for the literal darkness that floods the mansion at night and for the metaphorical darkness that infests the mansion through spirits. Miriam and Jonathan serve as direct contrasts to this darkness:
Through the dark they fought their way Armed with candlelight and open eyesThe couple wield lights as they journey through the dark halls, but their vulnerability shows through their eyes. This almost innocence, in conjunction with the candles, serves as a foil to the corrupted darkness of the house's visage. Ultimately, Miriam and Jonathan draw their characteristics from their life while the house draws from a crude imitation of life. The shadows only seem to be alive. The song both paints a vivid image and uses language to root that image in both actuality and symbolism. The duality of the diction and the striking subject matter are why I chose to defend this song as poetry.
I agree with your explanation of using diction and subject matter in "A Mansion in the Darkness" for a defense as poetry. Your interpretation of the darkness was also interesting.
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